by Charlie Rossiter
as the sky darkens
through twilight
to night
he's becoming
almost invisible
or is he transforming
to pure spirit
his clothes are soaked
and he's jumping
over knee high waves
it's eight o'clock
mid-september,
Mercury bright
on the horizon,
the moon slides
behind the face
of heavy clouds
that would be fleecy
in daylight
I watch from the beach
as he kicks squats
stands erect
stiffens
leaps runs kicks
waves arms
and flops
in shallows
my only hope
is 20, 30, 50
years from now
that fire he's got
still burns


There is excellent imagery in this poem. Great job engaging the senses. It's what poetry is supposed to do.